Frage von UlmsSkyliner:
Hello,
schaut euch doch mal bitte mein 2.produziertes music video now!
http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=5-onFcmlNUY
I look forward to constructive criticism!
Oh, and I'm only 16 ;-)
MfG Chris
Antwort von Axel:
In any case, a significant progress since the last. The narrow alley between the brick walls, with a red backlight, which did you develop. Good synonymous perspective when he top of the camera looks. Selective desaturation and stop by the disappearing trick types bring nothing but my opinion. The worst thing is paralysis of the facial cool singer. I'm saying: This film and drama with nothing to do, hands off of this senseless Plömpe!
Antwort von smooth-appeal:
Finde ich gut, there is need for improvement s.vielen agencies (primarily lighting, backlighting recording, color correction is not consistent), but for your second music video but passable result.
The protagonist should Prol äh his sunglasses s.besten throughout the material to have. His facial expression without glasses is very inappropriate.
As it comes to hip-hop goes, "fat" clothes + Bling Bling Benz + and + Drug + Bimma arms ;-)
Slightly more seriously: + semi Models with whom he is comforted - Cut - Still no better at it, depressed
Oh and my biggest concern s.die Youth: Listen to rock again. Rock right in my view - not this "I'm emo and trotzdem gut drauf shit" ;-)
Antwort von M-Kult:
Oh and my biggest concern s.die Youth: Listen to rock again. Rock right in my view - not this "I'm emo and trotzdem gut drauf shit" ;-) Amen
Improvement, definitely. But customers s.Deinen you need urgent work. ;)
ps sry4offtopic, but the times I had to emphasize
Antwort von B.DeKid:
Gude
Joa better than the first.
But as I said earlier
Prices obtained s.Anfang first none.
.... and this "work" I would be synonymous not imagine no preference whether with 16 or 61, not worth.
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Backlight via brighteners realize because you do not recognize the face
The "Schindler's List" B / W vs.. Color scenes bring the desired effect is not over.
The action with the windows drive, you should see "Wicked Of Ice Cube" look because you can see how something should be structured.
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@ Offtopic
What you hear is Muke for me .... relatively
There is good hip hop / rap as there are good rock
But with 16 you do because only with that will stop at the locations on where you hang around.
What are the EMOS? Are these disturbed "Tokio Hotel Looking Like Kids" .... they are probably already as a child in Dr. Hofmann's potion like .... of Rock and as far away as Heino of the German language song ;-)
(I always remember the little vampire s.Anton) I can recommend wenns goes to Rock for example.:
The Velvet Underground, Gratful Dead, Ziggy Stardust aka David Bowie, Pink Floyd, Roxy Music, Genesis, Creedence Clearwater Revival, Weather Report, Led Zeppelin, Def Leppard, Deep Purple, Steve Vai, T Rex, Iggy Pop ..... .................................................. ......................................... etc. ;-)
From the videos (and their quality) from the "Rock" time until garnicht anfgefangen ;-)
And because I am in terms of hip-hop provides just as many know the name of which suck (of the Message of view and I do not get my drugs naked girls and bling bling) I make this final times.
From the videos from the first time Rock garnicht anfgefangen ;-)
Alla machs UlmsSkyliner good un just next to the already
MfG
B. DeKid
Ps In your name I shall always think s.den famous sentence
In Ulm, around Ulm and around Ulm around to Ulm in Ulm, around Ulm and around ;-)
Antwort von Prinzregent:
- So I find synonymous vorallem the scene from the perspective of the frog in front of the house or not garnicht lit and it is just a slush recognizes.
- Furthermore, at the scene of the impact of window type not previously registered in the Camera look.
- Camera s.Zaun ride along, I find the idea of her well but do not pity you, or a dolly Steadycam searched. Is very blurred.
- The setting size is usually synonymous only the American attitude to see Beineab. That you should be synonymous vary a little example where he was behind the girls is still one or two settings Overshoulder and a close-up with its emotion or something. But even so we recognize ne line.
- At 1:57 I find the image as well synonymous and the blur too. Had perhaps synonymous rang again closer view can be extremely bleed or so in
The One who will be synonymous soon make his first music video but then of a punk band
Antwort von PowerMac:
(...) What are the EMOS? Are these disturbed "Tokio Hotel Looking Like Kids" .... they are probably already as a child in Dr. Hofmann's potion like .... of Rock and as far away as Heino of the German language song ;-) (I always remember the little vampire s.Anton) (...) Emo Emocore of coming - that's hardcore punk. The Jugendkultur "emo" has nothing to do with Tokio Hotel to do. Tokio Hotel uses no more than the clothing style.
Antwort von klaas:
oh, yes please, let us ne emocore start off topic discussion ...
I find the singers voice ... not exactly seem as if he is in some settings the stop grinning ... vllt sonnenbrille easy on the mind;) ..
otherwise: respectful, if the synonymous mE nothing with your age has to do;) is salmon but, now if you're 16 or 36 ...
gruß, klaas.
ps: I am a rocker;)
Antwort von B.DeKid:
Offtopic
Powermac ;-) ;-)
I was already clear, but thanks.
But here you'll find cool designs always synonymous ...
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=EMO
MfG
B. DeKid
PS. As to the "He should not look into the camera before he shatters a window ....
First, he should then smash them synonymous, synonymous match is not
"At the table sit the picture of his ex-retaining, this desperate throw to the wall, then recording of the picture frame and shards on the floor ... so it would be better I think
Second
- Ice Cube
It turns frustration nix kaputt!
Antwort von Ficeduld:
Good done! Point.
Most improved is the guy ... and as I said the customer ..... naja
Antwort von david2:
I think it's good!
The music is not my taste (I had yet to write), at least means the Articles.
(Except for the guy), there's apparently a lot of good ( "Directing" -) invasions! Get nix persuade, to make it ... so ... kuck 'times since ... .
When it is determined to be more synonymous cutting something "round".
War determines massive work (oh yes, once more students ...).
Antwort von UlmsSkyliner:
Hello,
Now I get here again NEN entry post.
First I would like to thank you for the constructive criticism.
Yes that is true that the scene in seconds, 17 very muddy and poorly lit looks, but I have used because it flashes when recording (thunder) and that flash at the very Texstelle fits.
This is synonymous to me noticed that he worked for the impact of the scene window looks into the camera.
Here was yet another point of criticism Illumination and Color correction mentioned.
Could you please be as precise on the 2 points?
How would I then edit the colors, or it says that the colors in some good shots and then come back to normal "l come?
And how would I want to illuminate? No Electricity! And I would have had. What then? For example, when recording in the abgebranten House, as it would have given lit? (eg, seconds 22)
And do you know whether it is chance, to get a sponsor of an equipment for the filming days to provide.
I think almost 10,000 clicks in just 3 days to convince!
MfG Chris
Antwort von raymaker:
And do you know whether it is chance, to get a sponsor of an equipment for the filming days to provide.
I think almost 10,000 clicks in just 3 days to convince!
Just two more zeros ran, then you can talk about it.
There are thousands of 10k-50k-music videos on Youtube.
The sponsor will always exceed the client, for which you work. Nobody outside will tell you: "Here, take the equipment and hab mal few days of fun."
Recruit your references, work out the technique, you acquire references, make it as a side job, you acquire references.
