Frage von anna polika:
Painted in Vienna,
last April,
taken with Canon XM2 35mm adapter Nikon 50mm.
Antwort von newbornzombie:
Very nicely made! The camera settings have pleased me, synonymous, the cuts were well placed. The speaker has, however, particularly s.Anfang sounded as if he would read off everything.
Was it hard to get permission to film in the building?
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Antwort von anna polika:
Thank you for your criticism! The voice s.Anfang synonymous not quite fit me, but I had as yet heard nothing negative about this, although I had read off several times raised the issue with the fast. Except in time of the stressful conditions during the recording of the text I had put in the mail will probably take more breaks. It is indeed quite a lot of information s.Anfang get reingehaut but we ought to solve the really better! With the rotation had permission gabs so far no problems, because we, the main character, an assistant and I am in this hospital, whenever the actual length of our community service /.
Antwort von domain:
Already clearly goes beyond the usual amateur level. In the initial texts, I would be synonymous to cut into some of breaks, so as not to heruntergeratscht sounds. The art of the speaker is usin the precisely timed intervals, specifically the learn English actors very well.
One remembers synonymous for a certain infatuation with camera movement. DOF and other effects that are not absolutely necessary and in some scenes, such as when running the troubled civil servant in the institution that they are simply too long and too boring and do not contribute to the density of the plot.
As for the idea, it is of course utterly absurd and unrealistic, but it has always been the strength of Ösis see Kottan etc.
Overall, however, been a truly impressive performance.
Antwort von domain:
Addendum: It is probably extremely hard to cast off one Amateurtoutch, but you have succeeded already half
Antwort von anna polika:
Synonymous Thanks for your feedback and praise. This is my first short film and I must admit that when I turn but synonymous (in fact, on average, not as to the need for certain settings, but rather to the "specificity"; Tiefenunschärfe long "quiet" tracking shots, or the termination is with the bed for me "or" something special), the picture has taken shape. But I am glad that I already own, especially when the panic scene, noticed a lack of vitality is. My next project should have only one quarter the length of this film, the variety of camera settings will be manageable, so I can make me more worried about this and put the focus on the image configurations and camera work and will. Once again, thanks for the constructive criticism.
Antwort von Moritzk:
Really a very successful film! I did the last half hour still busy with your other movies, and am really very enthusiastic ...
Much continued success on your / your way
