Frage von capac:
so right now the movie version of my application!
please again and enjoy!
gruß Capac
Antwort von capac:
sorry that with the new theme was not intentional ...!
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
because I just noticed that s.Anfang no Kamerakran stood. Did I write thread running in parallel. Is just a swing. still brings excitement.
Perhaps an admin so the two threads join?
http://forum.slashcam.de/and-noch-ein-bewerbungsfilm-vt47883.html?highlight =
(see there!)
Many dear greetings
Constantin
Antwort von capac:
yes the would join with the super.
some of us only once on this thread is if there is legal?
Capac
Antwort von eitlefilme:
Hello!
Allow me criticism (but not coming up with the idea to criticize me!)
s.gut cut (especially the animated transitions find ich nett)
b) too long
c) miserable story - opaque (I'm not an artistic touch)
d) the guy needs to be re-made (many errors - sometimes a double dot times not to (one before and no space) are not synonymous (I personally am abspannfetishist)
not evil - purely personal views
daniel the vain
Antwort von capac:
g I do not care not to attack immediately.
everyone has his opinion and that's good!
fair and constructive, the hauptsache!
danke für dein kommentar!
gruß Capac
Antwort von eitlefilme:
immer wieder gerne * fg *
daniel - if you desire you can have my "old" movies - the new (good but not perfect) is only available on dvd:
old:
http://www.eitle.at/index.php?inhalt=eitlerdownloadbereich (and then the thick link)
the current (or just be s.alt):
http://www.eitle.at/index.php?inhalt=eitlefilme&inhaltlink=hauptfilm003/index.html&menulink=eitlefilme/links.php?menuauswahl=hauptfilme
mfg daniel
Antwort von Login_vergessen:
The cuts and shots find ich klasse.
I think the story is not opaque. From the moment in which both in the kitchen (?) Talk to each other, but you know in which direction the story runs - but without boring them. The lighting design in the 'Treaty Room "gefällt mir gut.
Not so dolle can I find the conclusion. Thus saith not a doctor. I would have liked it better when only the scene of the outside through the glass facade would have been rotated, with no dialogue, only with "body language" ...
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
would have been the scene just outside of view, one would probably do nothing more savvy.
I find the idea very well that the doctor comes. But the doctor would in any event when the man left and a nurse come with him the message and not to bring about the corridor.
in some cases, even equal to a psychiatrist here. There were so many possibilities.
To remain faithful to the style, did you, for example, the physician can say a sentence and then can sound "fuzzy" can be, perhaps again a "clack" to insert the picture can be blurred, then ausfaden Sound, only show facial expressions and gestures. The main thing is that the doctor remains and the end is realistic and clear. (My opinion!)
Many dear greetings
Constantin
Antwort von capac:
hallo freunde!
erstmal vielen lieben dank für eure comments!
I had just completed a brief opening in the stand that I do not audit in Ludwigsburg up bin.
I press all the others remain strong daumen!
now remains for me to berlin s.zu wait.
best greetings from bremen and nice easter days!
Jochem
Antwort von Schilla:
Even if you maybe just extremely excited and are bent due to the cancellation and the vll. promise yet to come, synonymous, I wanted to say a few things to say.
The initial impression was of: "Ah good idea" about smiling all the way to "Huh? What should it?" present.
Good I liked the camera and the ideas - s.manchen bodies was too fast or dirty work, is certainly a perfect job, but it is worth it.
The story is of course a matter of taste, it seemed s.manchen agencies unfortunately a little dirty - here it is in the placement of the scene and language work differently.
Despeckle / raindrops on the camera lens are certainly bugs that can happen to anyone - but the audience verschmerzt only rarely to never.
Overall impression: The basic idea and the "really" wanted to see, however, seemed to me more like a pool - the camera tracks you have always wanted to make, or large effects and impressions through tough cuts are my personal opinion, use sparingly.
Schnitzer, like the personal notes in the credits (which is a little fix was) might loosen up the shock deliberate and unnecessary to convey (as synonymous in the beginning: "A film of a certain amateur ...") character not to be.
So wide and so are working fine:)
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
and hard cuts are my personal opinion, use sparingly. I think that visors are only sparingly, as are any effects. Hard cuts appear to me s.natürlichsten and in each film are almost exclusively used.
Since I have the rest but completely agree with and make it sound as if you did know, I think rather that I am a little bit you've misunderstood?
Many greetings,
Constantin
Antwort von Schilla:
Yes that was a little wrong words. I meant with the "hard cut" is not natural but the wanted hard, so if the eye of the viewer it feels uncomfortable. That was my memory after S.2-3 points and the case should act as an art funds. But it is more out of personal conviction, not the best.
A Neuschnitt can round off the entire film and would certainly worthwhile!
PS: What is Continuity? Survival? The film is only for the English-speaking countries:) Nothing for ungut, but I said nothing.
Antwort von Login_vergessen:
PS: What is Continuity? Survival? The film is only for the English-speaking countries:) Nothing for ungut, but I said nothing. Have you already almost correctly überstezt. It is the term for a person whose job it is to connect scenes, cuts, etc. to make sure that eg the Zigarrette in the left hand remains synonymous left, an empty glass of the same fluid level and it has next and so forth ...
Otherwise it may be called "connection errors", which looks silly from ...
Antwort von capac:
hallo freunde!
I thank you very much for your tips and advice! I'll take my heart because they are very helpful and above all accurate! personal views are always different but important. Finally, are you and the audience will decide on your own criteria and interests!
So many thanks again and I will take you to keep whether doing what is in berlin.
until then
liebe grüße
Jochem
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
That I must follow the same s.eine "Monk" think ;-)
Did not know that something in a film. If I am not necessarily synonymous so necessary in a good director!
If one helps me, and it was only by boost creative thinking, the bistro cook, bring food: "Creative Suggestion."
(Slightly ironically, please take the not so serious!) Many greetings,
Constantin
