Frage von DanielK.:
Hello, I wanted to ask what time it on my first Drebuch says.
It is not in the form of script, but simply the story briefly recorded. It is synonymous not very professional, it is only the first idea.
I hope someone has the time to read through his thoughts and to write.
Here it is:
Antwort von AndyZZ:
How sick is the only man ... * * kopfschüttel
1. No script, but a short story.
2. Poor expression, defective Ortho graphics and semantics.
3. Axes, blood, severed hands ... there is nothing else?
4. Parents who kill their children, we have probably more synonymous than enough, every day in the newspaper to read. Absolutely tasteless theme!
I think you're 14-16 years old, of course, have no children and seen too many horror movies that really are only S.18.
Antwort von BananaDragon:
I myself am a very big fan of horror movies, but your story is just pointless and will not next as blood, blood, blood.
Even the thought "oh, the kids somehow get on your nerves, so we kill them to stop the brutal nature and possible way" is pretty fairly flat.
If you make a horror film want to do, then imagine a story but a little more tension on now, rather than brain-less geslashe (of which there is really enough).
I myself, am only s.Horrorfilme rantrauen if I had a little more experience, because I think that is a horror film is a very difficult project. You need your audience to really shock, otherwise they get bored. If someone comes in the horror he sees WILL scare / disgust etc. - he can not he will find the film badly.
Do not be discouraged. Setz 'dich nochmal out and just think you better story from ne. I know how hard it is. I'm a bloody Beginners and my first try of the Ultra-Short film on the series to get - of course this reminds me of nothing to say. But this is already - and if you have trouble synonymous give you good ideas.
Greeting
Marco
Antwort von AndyZZ:
Really good horror films are synonymous without senseless splatter from. The horror arises in the brain and not on the canvas.
Look at the first ever Halloween s.oder Poltergeist. These are films that get under your skin without Ekelfilmen like Hostel or the like to be. Dance of the Devil was really creepy synonymous not a maximum appetitverderbend.
Antwort von BananaDragon:
Right. Dance of the Devils is a very good example of a bad horror movie.
Antwort von sammy:
I wanted only just laugh.
But then I found the story not so bad. Due to the end!
If one turns as black comedy, then it would be like me.
I can not imagine that it is seriously meant.
Antwort von sammy:
Hello,
jönntest you might more closely your idea of a black comedy described, so how do you get the connection in order before?
Antwort von sammy:
my idea of a black comedy would be exaggerated facial expressions (the naked gun), imposing, yet ironic Music (Der Tod steht ihr Good) and splatter as much as Evil Dead.
That reminds me just now too late, Scary Movie is probably a bit similar.
It is precisely the branch which is somewhat splintered - which has not the horror movie? Good suitable as a parody.
I've got some bad horror movies and this cut-branch popping scenes are somehow always there.
Antwort von Axel:
Trash Horror is popular with beginners in scenic filmmaking, because the rules are fairly simple. If, therefore, that they are so trite. Just makes this film, without you to care about what is said here. I still have a little idea for you: Make it as a silent film. I think not, with background music, but without sound. Then I would watch it to me even if it makes it here online.
Antwort von sammy:
A trashy horror movie with no sound?
this is not good ...
psycho-thriller, yes ... no carnage
Antwort von Axel:
A trashy horror movie with no sound?
this is not good ...
psycho-thriller, yes ... no carnage One of the guys, "the hero", is deaf. For example. I'm about Peppe in the case to bring. If you look at, especially when one begins with film, only on the visual language can leave, or is it just needs to concentrate, learn more. The film will be with this "script" no Knaller anyway. Look at something like this: A bad thing less. What began as a silent film does not synonymous, nothing good anyway.
Antwort von sammy:
films for the deaf, but otherwise done.
and without a ton is bored of hearing viewers quickly.
without dialogue, but without a ton as steps or atmo is not good
Antwort von Axel:
Stereotype thinking. No film for the deaf! A film that you a dumb world. If the film-makers guys require a little research: find a Gebärdesprache coach. All three are silent. They do s.Anfang sign that they want to go camping. This is the place. Could be really good. The "plot" should of course be adjusted.
Antwort von glumschie:
The story could be quite simple but still save with a red herring or what that means:
So the parents want to kill rotznase, which is synonymous shown and beautiful wide ausgewalzt ... and then it turns out they have their Splatter fantasy only dreamed of: waking up when they are shackled and the kids just distribute 20 L super gasoline in the bedroom! Dim and OUT!
:-))))
