Frage von duvancam:
Hello together,
Thus, new trial. What do you think of the trailer? If he want more? If the message across? Who will be the next chancellor?
Freu mich feedback as always. So now give me dirty:)
http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=VIbYMqxxN3Y
(old "Trailer")
http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=DDfOtBglmrs
Thanks for looking!
Max
Antwort von domain:
Is entertaining and makes curious. The start with the static and partially relatively uninteresting buildings recordings, I would cut something and sometimes synonymous something more Atmosound durchklingen leave.
Antwort von raymaker:
Is entertaining and makes curious. The start with the static and partially relatively uninteresting buildings recordings, I would cut something and sometimes synonymous something more Atmosound durchklingen leave. Ditto. And I already s.Ende of the trailer of the jugglers was so taken that I have forgotten that since a lengthy scene was s.Anfang;)
Is nice, I like it.
Antwort von duvancam:
thank you in advance for your feedback
that with the beginning I would not have so much: D
in fact there are "only" three settings which I do not think so well, but I have used in order to stay in rhythm
the atmo with the sound is such a thing as the whole festival over loud music is gone and the atmo so relatively unfavorably with the new sound would have been mixed.
but thank you anyway for your suggestions!
Antwort von domain:
Atmosound need not be O-Sound. Mix preserves itself from what many matches together.
Antwort von FabeX:
So ich finds super ..
The beginning with the buildings .. naja .. ok, since you could cut something ..
but otherwise really good .. because you can not look away .. speaks to an emotional.
The only thing that has disturbed me sometimes is that the percussion to the rock sound sometimes not 100% in the bar were ..
lg
andi
Antwort von tv-man_sh:
The first 54 seconds are definitely scrap. Not reduce, but gone and so is complete. Altogether there are 2'30 ", the viewer does not convey message. There are 150 seconds away time. The first picture should be an eye catcher in the last picture should be a final message s.den spectators included. Today you have an average of 2 seconds time, your audience to make clear that he is your trailer should be. If you do not, he will wegklicken and turn to something more interesting. After all this is about people, with the matter are not yet familiar and only be interested . Start with the so what you offer s.der 55 seconds: Start with children. Children are positively demonstrated, moreover, the images are moving, colorful and begin the approach to reveal what it is (they do so curious). About Lasse communicating the images that it can s.besten, namely "People in the Picture, which with what they do, a message." waivers on building facades and people, the suitcases behind him draw.
Show times but friends and acquaintances and your contribution will always ask them for a few minutes later, which pictures them s.stärksten in mind and what they still remember. It will probably be the pictures, something in which people communicate through their actions have. It will certainly not be boring facades;)
Maybe's it going synonymous question of the audience to say that it is a juggling convention, which to visit, it sure would be worthwhile. So according to the motto: "Hey, schau'her what I can, it will inspire you. Be part of it."
Otherwise, as a learning Quickie maybe look here:
Antwort von duvancam:
@ domain: where thou hast fairly .. because I have admittedly never thought of:)
@ fabex: danke dir synonymous
so, and now
tv-man_sh: many, many thanks for your very helpful criticism!
I will briefly tell you of the entries. as you note, gives the trailer an outside no message. because I give you absolutely right. I had basically no plan but had begun, the trailer more or less chronologically reappraisal. because the chronology for me with an introduction by the start of the venue, I decided for the homes but bla bla bla, as the beginning of my trailer is synonymous explanation here too long already;) in short: the whole was more or less for the participants who have attended the convention ..
Long story short: your criticism inspired me to take another, thoughtful start to plunge.
a new mill near future, I can not yet afford the XL1S I now have is to the bitter end ausgeschlachtet;)
thanks for the link, very interesting!
see you soon
Max
Antwort von duvancam:
so, have tried the criticisms into account and the whole strongly reduced
http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=VIbYMqxxN3Y
the sound on youtube makes me Although kot * n, but what will you do:)
Antwort von FabeX:
I like the clip is quite good (although I have with this music can not really friends .. but geschmackssache).
However, one can combine the two clips (the last long and this one) I do not compare. They are the presentation of her totally different.
The previous was exciting .. here shows more of the fun factor of the event ..
lg
andi
Antwort von duvancam:
hey andi,
yes, the two are in fact completely different. I've tried, the points of tv-man_sh to be taken into account and to cut a trailer, the one of the first and second s.anspricht conveys a clear message.
The first "trailer" (I will not call him so) was more for the people who were at the festival to get a little to remember.
the second is s.solche the JFF not know them or maybe have heard of, but do not know whether they want to go there or not.
Antwort von Prinzregent:
The second shows the emotions and the whole seems very funny is / was. synonymous finds klasse
Antwort von Jogi:
Last version I like s.besten. Joie de vivre comes s.gut over! Also the length is right. Synonymous But I would use a different music. Asian themes are too Hauf.
