Frage von PowerMac:
Hi,
We are always curious as to your opinions.
This is a five minute promotional film for Wirsol for which we are currently producing a lot of films. Topic: How is photovoltaics!
We had about five days of shooting, was rotated on a 7D and 5D with a Canon Primes. Composed, the Music of Rolf Ellmer.
Antwort von DTEurope:
Has become good.
Remove from 0:46 top right edge of the gray background yet.
But I would still replace the white background or use it for writing.
Antwort von PowerMac:
What is gray in 0:46 minutes? I discover nothing ...
Antwort von ArnAuge:
I think it's pretty synonymous.
I am only the father did a bit naive, euphoric and the white background is so hard that the exterior shots look almost flat against it. - But is a matter of taste.
LG
Arno
Antwort von DTEurope:
the far right top (see red arrow)
Antwort von PowerMac:
Indeed. Thank you. No one has yet discovered at x controls.
Antwort von DTEurope:
no problem. You're welcome.
Antwort von Korbi:
very nice now. the flow is right.
are a few small things I noticed:
- Disturbing the reflections in the glasses a little. difficult to clearly
- 1:31 the lady would have 1 / 4 CTB sure no harm
- Us2: 32 cut the into the close I would hide a bit better, as I did not do between two sets.
- 2:59, unfortunately, not quite sharp
- 4:20, the crane shot wobbles s.schluss quite a bit. EVLT SmoothCam a problem?
- The small gray strip me is synonymous noticed
But you know, all just subjective opinions.
greeting and forwards forwards
one thing I forgot: the cloud-clipping unfortunately sometimes. maybe try to establish a structure over it.
ton is sometimes not quite synchronously, but not so bad
Antwort von Pianist:
I like the movie too, I would only continue insisting that the sound bites are taken of people in a room with studio acoustics, otherwise it is a bit irritating that the people sitting on the one hand in "no" space, on the other hand, the space is clearly audible but. And I would compress the original sound even more synonymous to the average volume increases. People fall in speaking sometimes from something that is quite normal, but you can compress a great sound editing.
Then something in the picture: As you can see quite a s.Ende how he stands on top of the ridge and measures the sun. He has no safety harnesses to, but he should. This would engage s.Dach somewhere, so he is not quite to the bottom will fall when it falls.
So much for the film. Now I have but to ask you a personal opinion about the movie theme: I would not ruin my house with something, I find such plants terrible. In addition, we must be prepared so that the fire department does not erase, but controls the burning house in the event of a case can be. They go not even in the vicinity of such houses because the panels will fly down. Whether emergency or not. But for that you can not help, your clients will be satisfied.
Matthias
Antwort von rush:
Moin,
is holding a promotional film;) become good part - you can complain non-much.
Personally, I too "cheesy" by history with the family or the family man who plays to my mind a little too excited;)
Some reflections I was not so cheap but is synonymous with glasses and movement never easy.
Sound is partially something s.bei the original sounds.
Sometimes I had the impression that the depth of the talks was very small ... (Chin already blurred ..)... but may be synonymous s.der Compression youtube:)
Otherwise the company a good video ...
Antwort von majaprinz:
I do not like the lighting in the interviews. The majority of the face is fairly uniform in color and right rear of the light is much too intense.
The father is very easy to inspire "I've already seen of my house I !!!!", participating he does not deny that he is so excited of the solar system.
The color of the exterior shots are on my monitor too colorful and extremely blurred, I suppose, was because in the Postpro did what?
Antwort von B.DeKid:
Become good.
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What sort of lens used you, what did you used to light outside.
MfG
B. DeKid
Antwort von Mantas:
hehe ... the father slimy swollen, and everything that goes: D
otherwise quite good lately.
to the mac taskbar, then I ask myself really what you want
Antwort von jogol:
It works! I want a roof synonymous, synonymous sun I want, I want a daughter synonymous with Copter, I will always synonymous in a good mood, I want synonymous sun hairstyle. Almost intrusive positive attitude. If it was so intended, it has become good. Has something of Pleasantville. And what makes Opdenhövel at Wirsol?
Antwort von r.p.television:
Good first impression. Like me and the message comes over.
As for me, unfortunately, very disturbing: After the first recording is beautifully kadrierten crane right after I had a cut in there before. Shale horizon and the vertical framing I do not like.
With slightly crooked horizon I get always an itch. I know that with the crane is difficult and often occurs (oblique leveling) - I would have left the scene away. Later in the film are still somewhere crooked shots. You may easily zoom and rotate in the mail?
The close-ups of the faces are often the focus next - sometimes completely - or only the eyes behind the spectacles are sharp, but blurred the chin, which looks a little unhappy.
The company's will like.
Antwort von schlaflos011:
Booyah! Like it very much. I wish to highlight the family photographs s.1: 04, which I find particularly successful.
How to light up glasses without seeing film light? People have with the head moving in the interview my difficulties. You can see every day but on TV.
Nice clip - synonymous the choice of music I find very appropriate.
Antwort von Pianist:
How to light up glasses without seeing film light? Something I always do with two Softbox Dedolights, of which I leave to come across to the left side and the right to make the angle as large as possible. Then even have people with very complex glasses no reflections.
Matthias
Antwort von schlaflos011:
Something I always do with two Softbox Dedolights, of which I leave to come across to the left side and the right to make the angle as large as possible. Thank you.
Antwort von PowerMac:
Hi, thanks for the feedback first.
5D and 7D in the interviews, 7D on the crane during construction, and iGadgets scenes.
This 85mm, 1.2 of Canon and Canon 50mm 1.4, and various zoom.
In the garden about 8 KW HMI PAR, many reflectors, a Silk Butterfly. In the studio Kinoflos, ring light, and another 4 KW HMI.
Antwort von B.DeKid:
Thanks
Antwort von soan:
Interviews for an "authentic" effect is always a great stylistic devices. They are synonymous but a two-edged sword: If they look real, they must be genuine. If they are found - they may not look like made.
Here, all interviews with the head of the family come over and made quite cut it down the entire film.
Super light, good music, very well rotated. The interviews seem to me like a theater - not good enough for the desired effect.
The film would win in a short form with more off-tones clearly.
PS: Oh yes - the reflection of the glasses. Do I know the problem. As the customer places a lot of coal to light and from Klimmbimm s.Ende and they built shit. Can happen :-)
Antwort von PowerMac:
Aha! We found the interface rather that the father should herausreisst trend. Does the father inauthentic way?
More criticism?
Antwort von rush:
Aha! Does the father inauthentic way?
Yes - for my taste, in any case!
I would have found it even better without the whole family ... or the family only as a background ...
"And we look to the roof ... and during which produces electricity ... I can hardly believe it's "....
Does hold me for very staged ... So new solar power is not synonymous then again .. It seems that should begin to look like it would be something completely off;) On the contrary ... It was supposed to be more "normal" ...
Antwort von blowup:
Aha! We found the interface rather that the father should herausreisst trend. Does the father inauthentic way?
More criticism? If you ask already ... I wanted to actually write anything, so thinks None, it would be (wg my critique s.dem plant-film) was personal. So even without any "antiquated advertising wisdom":
The father is really the hammer and hard s.der satire. It is not only the exaggerated way, but I feel that works all the product benefits / features of the series after. So what I would be better distributed over several. (He is enthusiastic about the technique, the woman is pleased with the financial, the child says something about how beautiful the sun reflects ...).
BTW: I associate above all difficulties in the father, the voice of the person. Whether it synchronicity or s.der s.Raumklang was, I do not know. Somehow not really fit together.
No offense.
Antwort von derpianoman:
Hi PowerMac
Hats off!
The father definitely has charisma. He is the kind of person who illuminate a sometimes almost too positive. His "madness" is perhaps a bit thick - but not exactly advertising MUST SO?
I have an idea / request / suggestion: Let us turn our amateurs amateur videos. And if an amateur has mistaken for a professional just post the link to ask this (or other) of your videos and if he detects a difference in quality ...
We must not let the forum take Welter-to heavy weight! , -)
LG!
Klaus
Antwort von PowerMac:
Aha! We found the interface rather that the father should herausreisst trend. Does the father inauthentic way?
More criticism?
If you ask already ... I wanted to actually write anything, so thinks None, it would be (wg my critique s.dem plant-film) was personal. So even without any "antiquated advertising wisdom":
The father is really the hammer and hard s.der satire. It is not only the exaggerated way, but I feel that works all the product benefits / features of the series after. So what I would be better distributed over several. (He is enthusiastic about the technique, the woman is pleased with the financial, the child says something about how beautiful the sun reflects ...).
BTW: I associate above all difficulties in the father, the voice of the person. Whether it synchronicity or s.der s.Raumklang was, I do not know. Somehow not really fit together.
No offense. This is a point which is discussed s.dem straight. Can weaken or so? Interestingly, the father has to some viewers than almost exaggerated, which find it most authentic and some viewers are swept away and radiate it.
Antwort von derpianoman:
... but I feel that works all the product benefits / features of the series after. So what I would be better distributed over several. (He is enthusiastic about the technique, the woman is pleased with the financial, the child says something about how beautiful the sun is reflected ... If you had filmed with us I would have synonymous alone, "the great word" swinging! Well, my wife would have skipped determined because I had forgotten something ... , -)
Seriously: (? Paid =) This advertising campaign is still s.die fathers who have decisionmaking, whether for 10 years and 20 years (= investment doubled) do their job in creating hard earned cash. And when the children are as small as here, the cottage is normally goes fully in the financing, which is exactly WHY it:
Papa again, "hurting financially" .. and: voilà
does not hurt at all! As the beams! @ Power Mac: they were your requirements / considerations?
Antwort von Mantas:
the father of something similar to weaken to a very enthusiastic scientology
Antwort von Henri:
The father looks like one of those unbearable Soap Actor. He might do better advertising for teeth whitening. And this "Yes, madness ..." somehow reminds s.TV shopping. Really very borderline. Even the CEO does with his ever upraised chin rather unsymphatisch. All in all, the film is unbelievable to me. Feels Like 10 times in a row, the word-roof system - is this normal usage? The future of our children blah, blah, and 8% return (Who will work out because even have to?).
Otherwise, a one on film with asterisks.
Antwort von Korbi:
I would restrain him a little synonymous
Antwort von PowerMac:
Yes. Target group: married couples (with men arrive almost always with the idea that women are very rare, however, the acquisition nevertheless both decision), 27-50, private cottage in the country / town, children, often in the development area dwelling, not necessarily wealthy, but synonymous not poor.
Such parents usually have the money to increase and 'to do something for the future' found (for their own children) in the head and really good. V. s.dass the supply is paid for 20 for years, is a good argument, coupled with a competent company, the performance
guarantees. The beautiful s.dem film is that I find good solar energy synonymous. It must nevertheless still be a lot better, so that renewable forms of energy someday actually make the total energy supply. This is undisputed. From the point of grid parity the whole thing is completely down to earth.
Antwort von kalle70:
Artisan class made.
Since there `s only for the subtle gaaaanz to grumble something.
But the content and the form I was already after 1 min already almost made me sick.
It borders s.Prostitution produce something.
But, you really earn money.
Antwort von derpianoman:
easy, Kalle! Please do not throw up (on the carpet)!
Dat iss keen balance feature, investigative journalism ...
W e iss dat
coloring! not mess =, but show off!
