Frage von fenixmoon:
Hello,
I have just completed my second film. It's called "The Big Bang" and juxtaposes the harsh reality of our nature.
Watch the short film at:
www.videocinema.de The strip can be streamed over the Internet (and DSL version 56k version) or in a better quality in a ZIP file for download (90 MB).
Positive and negative criticism is also always welcome!
Best regards,
Henning
Antwort von Acer:
Hi Henning,
I've downloaded the movie and I already looked at.
Zuersteinmal the positive criticism:
-The locations were reasonably okay
The designs were synonymous-cool, but too often repeated
-The Effect class were
-The guy was not too amateurish, that is: Directing - Henning Beyer, Production - Henning Beyer, script - Henning Beyer;
but once everything together for hours without repeating the name, has with good cast!
Then the negative criticism:
-The music was at a soporific and inappropriate
-The message came to me not to (The Big Bang destroyed the "Before" life before our people's time??)
-The motives s.Anfang were too boring, just s.der middle of the actual movie came about a bit of movement by the fast moving action
This noise (black and white ants football) but is in fact synonymous of the gamma-rays of the Big Bang, right?
All in all, a film that one can look at, but not really
exhilarating and convincing was ...
Sorry, but this is my opinion, I hope that the others have a different taste because Slashcam than me, you never know ...
Okay
Have fun and success in your next production,
Hopes
Acer
Antwort von Lawrence:
Aloah,
So I'm beginning erstmal synonymous with the positive things:
- Strong bright colors are beautiful (what camcorder?)
- Designs synonymous quite well
- The Time Lapse highway bridge etc looked very good
- The black and white effects
- The film s.Mitte Dynamics
Negative to say about that
- The intro as the outro synonymous in my opinion, much too long with so few minutes of film (especially the intro, and as time goes off the movie ...)
- Very often monotonous pans across landscapes
- Sometimes synonymous much too fast panning (following the motto, if more can be seen, one has to rotate faster, so you can see everything then yes synonymous)
- Often times synonymous same motives
- Sometimes the camera wobbles briefly fairly dolle as if you could have folded, the display or something
- The music must be something for my buddy (Ambient, Industrial, something), the direction, but mainstream is not ^ ^ it is for me very annoying
- The movie s.sich is too long, you could cut it
However, I think it's good that someone here synonymous shows a film. Yes, there's not too often. But I was synonymous try again soon;)
Greets
Antwort von Acer:
What program did you cut, and how Lawence already asked: What camcorder did you filmed?
Thank you,
Acer
Antwort von der kritiker ;):
sorry, but I've never seen as boring
Antwort von fenixmoon:
Hello
Thank you for your good and bad comments!
It was synonymous with the music I knew. Due to lack of time the Project was more than half a year on ice, and now I have the sound in the short term with a hot knitting needle to finish the movie times at last.
In addition, future projects should indeed synonymous still have some improvement, which I then decided to not to allow the movie to be perfect ".
For the question about the program and Cam Editing: Premiere Pro 1.5 and Canon XM2 (super Cam am thrilled!).
sorry, but I've never seen as boring @ critic: How is a form of criticism you can save you quite frankly, because not at all meaningful. What do I want help for the future? Reasons?
CU,
Henning
Antwort von Pempi:
So ... maybe I'm a little slow but I peil not simply what the picture with the title and do the visual s.end to have ...
gibts ne erläuterung somewhere to your motion picture?
edit:
In the beginning everything started yet so harmless ...
This short film juxtaposes the harsh reality of our nature. So ... In short: the evil society ruins everything? why the picture just s.end?
Antwort von fenixmoon:
@ pempi:
Actually, the film should speak for itself. In addition, can / may / should each draw their own conclusions and interpretations thereof.
Nevertheless, a little explanation (just like me I thought so) is not universally applicable:
At the beginning of time: ...), pure nature (plants, animals, no modern technology
Later (and present): onset of industrialization, technology, ... -> Our technical innovations just will not only advantages, but are sometimes synonymous a curse. And if things continue like this:
Future: Technology is rampant, seizes power and suppressed (almost) everything natural. We live in an artificial world. Nature tries to defend herself. It ultimately comes to the 2nd Big Bang, the history of the universe as a reaction to the dominance of technology.
Future (next advanced): To HEAR (Credited yes, he is synonymous important ;-)) -> bird song as a reference to the renewal of the world and thus to a new opportunity.
How are you next? The cycle starts again? Or we live in paradise? Who knows ;-)
CU
Henning
Antwort von angelico:
henning,
'd say your message comes over ... if that is synonymous not entirely new. ultimately you need to know that our generation is not the first to grow up with the thoughts / being brought up that the world goes down and the people of this course s.der blame lies. Although the topic is interesting but quite synonymous, and, unfortunately, has already drained your film any new content / ansichten at.
You ask some of the film on contraste, visual, auditory and thematic. that'sa good idea and you should be conducive synonymous with your next project (s?). Contrasts are a good medium for something to make it clear to define.
as has been written so few here is the intro mediocre. captivate the audience in place and to move into the film, it is unfortunately somewhat paralyzing. this may be s.thema and s.deinem are rudimentary, can synonymous wanted? But yes, ultimately you want to make a film to look at the people happy. Quality produce ...!
synonymous, but in general I see talent, motivation and the will of filming thoughts clear to ... would say next but it'll still say a bit more stringent with the experiment and produce something with which the people can better identify. (travel of the heroic character, .. ...)
am looking forward to next projecte
cheers
red kiwi
