Frage von Pommbaer84:
Hello we have some time ago in a project framework / document a little short film rotated. Hope you like it. From idea to completion it took 5 days. 1 days idea, 2 swivel, 2 cut / post ....
Criticism very welcome!
MFG Pommbaer
Antwort von ambrus:
Has no one what it is .... or suspend the film is just too bad? I would like an opinion from the 3rd burning interest.
MfG Pommbaer
Antwort von ambrus:
YouTube .. shows me the movie only as a slideshow :-(
Noah
Antwort von Axel:
Interesting, well, good cut. The message is not so clear to me. And the music is too intrusive, especially the
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Antwort von PowerMac:
Hm ... great camera, with the exception of the scene in front Calculator. Because something amateurish by what the film does not help. The story is not so clear to me. Such cramping bad flashbacks are always explanatory and dramaturgically up. But perhaps the film needs das I do not know whether film always a message or moral needs. It is assumed that anything with right-wing. Personally, I like movies with a perfidious, somehow grotesque history with social critique (here: right-wing) do not mix. The mix is deliberately fast and cheap. But overall worth and no doubt a great film. He suffers but s.den limiting conditions of the short film. You need time, but has not and then tried in a short time with dramaturgical tricks (flashbacks, voices off, very impulsive scenes) things and synonymous moods and intentions to declare tried but parallel the characters and emotions slow to establish. And that is often boring. This discrepancy between "time" and "too much time" is often the reason why short films are not so popular.
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Antwort von Beatfabrikant:
General makes the movies a fairly professional and successful Einduck. But as we have said is one of the story is not really clever and the music is too intrusive. It is not really synonymous tension built up. We could have the computer room scene so synonymous, that they hear any cracking and thus is restless or something. Still not bad and then next.
Antwort von MuFim Productions:
Thanks for the critique. The Music posts finde s.manche a bissel synonymous too hard.
Still short on history. Roughly speaking is about revenge, but not like in almost every short film by the same murder, but about image, a stop to "create", where the victim in fear of death is to be seen. The boy was in his youth of the rights gejagd and humiliated. Since the guys too hard for him, he is the weakest of them, the neo-Nazi woman. It halt his personal Blitzkrieg ....... to finish with the past.
MfG Pommbaer
Antwort von PowerMac:
Lots of designs ...
