Frage von Carl Weber:
Hello movie fans!
I have a task on a given topic. Two acquaintances meet to go to the film course at the VHS to go.
This is intended as an exercise. Would be interesting to know what it says about my script?
Am very grateful for constructive feedback!
http://rapidshare.de/files/40731681/Treffen.pdf.htm
Antwort von Axel:
Virtually unreadable, this table format is not very useful. You confuse script with filming
scheduled. The idea could be very funny across the confusion of what these people are talking nonsense for one, would only have to be increased even more.
Antwort von Musashi:
Hello Carl Weber
like Axel said, this is very difficult to read. Man s.Anfang not know how to read. Columns way, or line by line. There are still some spelling and clerical errors in the script. In a (professional) script are synonymous, not so many directions, each camera setting and-ride describe.
Unless, of course, that this part of your task.
Content, I find the whole not bad.
For the design and the format of scripts, I recommend you look at the following website reinzuschauen.
http://www.brand-xfilms.de/Filmschule/Das_Drehbuch/das_drehbuch.html
Antwort von Lutz Dieckmann:
Hi,
You can get synonymous with me a script for the tutorials and the accompanying schedule download. On the Page in the blog, as is the link. See site signature.
Greeting
Lutz
Antwort von jazzy_d:
I still think celtx.com toll.
