Frage von Heinrich123:
We have the staff rotated, in order to support its bad times
Antwort von FabeX:
I like it not bad ..
criticisms:
- Different fonts, different font sizes = bad
- At 00:32 I believe this requires rapid sequence of photos at about one second too late .. would be better if the clock on the cut would be
- This comic constantly changing image .. senseless effekt around ..
I like the music quite well .. is dynamic.
Antwort von RickyMartini:
My analysis:
0:05 title clearly too short!
0:11 Title to be short - not detectable in the Fast
heavily blurred Zugaufnahmen equal to 2 times - superfluous
Airplane recordings similar, too often
0:32 too brief screen changes - too many pictures!
-> Can trigger epilepsy - WARNING! Phew! My eyes!
0:46 significantly more pleasant time-lapse images
Camera too restless
1:06 Motorcycle Pictures unfortunately without setting change
1:49 windmills shaky and partly overexposed
1:18 & Cargo Crane relatively ok - the best part of the video!
1:26 Night pictures - what is important to recognize?
1:29 machinery images with filters - ok
1:40 per Schaeffler - ok
Generally lacking attitude change and a calmer Camera.
Your work is certainly well intentioned, but IMO needs a thorough reworking with new, better form,
without continual motion effects, the only annoying - Sorry for the unexpectedly harsh verdict.
Antwort von Heinrich123:
No No is ok Can you see it.
Have a very restless aware Scenrie used.
The time lapse recordings are made with photo. Follows beautiful in my eyes wiping effects.
Even the look was intentional.
But as I said
Your criticisms so we can see if a rather quiet film expected
Thank you for the criticism
Antwort von Heinrich123:
Hello FabeX
The music itself, I have made.
Bin amateur musicians.
Thank you for your constructive criticism!
Antwort von RickyMartini:
I did not expect fast film, because there is no indication as to read. ;)
A trailer Crank2 effect despite the knowledge of the extreme speed is still apparent lengths friendly. The English articles are synonymous even better read - not cluttered.
My criticism may seem harsh, but just wait, if some other action here first - then read this as a children's song! ;)
Criticism is intended to help the video maker to better videos to date. The harder the criticism, the more one has nachzulegen from its mistakes and to learn.
A beginner, there are bonus is not - nor a professional bonus.
What did you do as a criticism of other expected - only praise?
Antwort von Heinrich123:
No problem!
I'm going to get the rausnehmen what is valuable for me.
Thanks Again!
I want to learn and not defend.
Antwort von Basti27:
1. Why this mirror effect? Less is more
2. Typography .... ouch
3. Instrumental very good, the vocal reminds me somewhat s.einen porn movie ;-)
Message comes across, however, entertained the Music Spot Passig
Antwort von Heinrich123:
Thank you!
The überleg with the porn I still :-))
Type occurs in normal resolution schrottig really good in HD on television looks noble.
Thank you for your constructive criticism!
:-))
Antwort von DoBBy:
My criticism may seem harsh, but just wait, if some other action here first - then read this as a children's song! ;) Oh jaaa! I can very well imagine, whom thou here with "some others" do;)
Antwort von RickyMartini:
My criticism may seem harsh, but just wait, if some other action here first - then read this as a children's song! ;)
Oh jaaa! I can very well imagine, whom thou here with "some others" do;) The seem to be completely rauszuhalten so far (which is too bad for its time).
Antwort von Markus73:
1:32 minutes
"Savings" you write with only an S s.Ende, synonymous when derailment of this type frequently reads.
1:42 minutes
Comma fault
Regards,
Markus
Antwort von domain:
If I were the film correctly, then it goes to the conservation of jobs at Schaeffler, so that the person continues to train, car and motor bike, and with the plane fun competitions in the truck tug can fly.
Antwort von Heinrich123:
So isses :-))
No. We wanted to show where Schaeffler learn is everywhere.
There's almost nothing that moves or rotates Schaeffler not where it is!
Antwort von domain:
Between Want and Can is the difference between amateur and professional.
I have Schaeffler of the first times ever on the occasion of the purchase of Continental belongs and then again only in N-TV that the Milliardärin probably would have taken over something and now quite troubled. But still have no idea what the actually produce. Will the same times but googled to this educational gap.
Antwort von Debonnaire:
My criticism may seem harsh, but just wait, if some other action here first - then read this as a children's song! ;) You think with "some other" surely not me, hopefully, but any PowerMac or? ;-)
Aaalsooo ...
During and after the film, which I regard as nothing Visionierung next've felt stressful because (reasons were mentioned in detail above), I simply asked: "What I wanted them really unattractive, totally incoherent images tell?"
First guess was: Imagefilm. - Discarded, since I s.Schluss not know what actually produces Schaeffler / offers (trains? Planes? Pedestrian zones? Subway entrances? Tractor trucks for what because now ??!!).
Second assumption: Third-world aid organization. - Discarded, since after Eintrittseineinhalbsekunden with the melancholic looking young people against the guerrilla background of that nothing more will appear.
Third assumption: Kamerastabilisationssystem. - Discarded, since apart from the shaky "before" shots by Schaeffler no products improved "after" pictures are shown.
Fourth assumption: Kirmes accessories. - Discarded, since after the text "Where is turns something" no longer refers to the hustle and bustle.
Fifth suspect: School / University: - Discarded, since the allegedly trained 50,000 people in the movie nothing discernible movement.
What I want to say: The movie is bad (formally, visually, manually) because after the film does not know what the movie wanted, unless you already knew beforehand what the movie wants! And those who already knew beforehand what the movie wants to be the film not be shown. Those who previously did not already knew what the film wants to know after the film synonymous not what he wanted, and no more than annoyed viewed the movie to have because it is absolutely annoying and unattractive, therefore, is coming! - Therefore: "What does this film tell me?"
Quite incidentally s.Schluss is the red lettering graphics "Yes to Schaefflerhilfe" top of her bleed!
Oh, now it could probably still be that I get to the "some others" could be counted, although I now have really held back ... ;-)
Antwort von DoBBy:
Oh, now it could probably still be that I get to the "some others" could be counted, although I now have really held back ... ;-) True, today's was really nice;) I give you synonymous in some criticism of your score right, she is not vain or useless ... DO YOU WANT TO because of the "some other" be counted?
Antwort von Debonnaire:
DO YOU WANT TO because of the "some other" be counted? Absolutely, yes! Especially if it means that I myself from Blabla-Einheitsbrei-writing-on-with-Halblegastheniebasis throw large coins insensitive decision ( "oh, Schöhöner water for one film! Mach Next SOH! Only through economic ühben Good one! It is still most None Gäfallen from the sky! years since mus man Gantz schöhn what Lerrnän if man wishes to make movies! ") stand out! :-)
Antwort von domain:
One should not only grumble was not fit all, but a positive synonymous times give instructions, so "Klugscheißermodus to:
The
aim of such a film is actually the central point in the preparation. In the repetition of this concern with each and every Picture Comment characterizes the issue in more viewers, it's sort of red thread for the entire film.
For the development of the script you need virtually an inner eye, which concerns the basis of a mental itinerary of each picture, each scene, each text razor sharp rise in the head.
Most already decided on the first few seconds, if a viewer is captivated. In the other scenes, the issue then elaborated and will be widened (facts, personal experiences, stories).
People also love a rounded end. So once again all the arguments together into a core statement.
So incidentally, a film shown here with the concern in my opinion can not ever live without the spoken text.
It simply amateurmäßig typical that the only interpretation of texts and graphic images with music and leaves everything nice comfortable covering.
