Frage von Benutzername:
Hi guys and girls,
have most of you calmed.
I have a new short film script written about 4 pages. Times the mob wanted to ask what you think. Not so shy, I'm not pregnant and that it should not be synonymous. it was fun and our little confrontation synonymous but not so bad, I thought.
The idea is not of me but the story and the script. I had the idea to regie.de up in a short film screenplay competition. The author has given me his consent, his idea up. Mifr his story about sex on the Internet not so much. The story he tells a good story but the s.sich I did not like. he was a police operation in which the police discover a place where should a woman be raped and the whole internet to live should be.
here's my story on this topic. 'm already looking forward to your opinions.
http://www.file-upload.net/download-475912/internetliebe.pdf.html
regards
BN
Antwort von AndyZZ:
Without going to be professional: to me it looks even more like a script from. Similarly, I would probably build synonymous. But I am not of this scale.
Your penchant for violence and to force expressions that you have not yet been stored.
Antwort von jayt1234:
Perhaps you interested in this?
http://youtube.com/watch?v=5uJ56utizCo
http://youtube.com/watch?v=8bf5PUjm7cc
PS. "more time" to write together. Proofreading!
Antwort von Benutzername:
Without going to be professional: to me it looks even more like a script from. Similarly, I would probably build synonymous. But I am not of this scale.
Your penchant for violence and to force expressions that you have not yet been stored. well, by virtue of the expression are limited. I would like. never used the word "appear * e" or "A **** hole" in my scripts to write. The word sonofabitch I personally do not think so bad and is a forceful expression but before a harmless.
violence remains synonymous with me here in limitless. always something violent in my stories has, unfortunately, with my past to do so. I can not quite drop, sorry. I do not want me to my past but herrausreden violence is now a subject in my life but it is less I try to make sure that they are not on hand. never would be another figure with a fire extinguisher and taking the skull if I would make the violence is not explicitly shown, because the synonymous to me is perverse.
I have times in a script with a man torn poor and shown a broken face, but not how it happened, he now looked mutilated. but I had the figure to tell the story so mutilated show. Many times it is no different.
bn
Antwort von Benutzername:
Perhaps you interested in this?
http://youtube.com/watch?v=5uJ56utizCo
http://youtube.com/watch?v=8bf5PUjm7cc
PS. "more time" to write together. Proofreading! I've reingeschaut but it has interested me, not now. times make pray for me so that I link your intention with the left better understand. Thank you.
how was my script? Story and so?
bn
Antwort von Benutzername:
the script is so bad, which is more dafzu None here wants to express? or you can waste just blabber and do it not because you know that I do not like? not so shy I can be synonymous nice when you come over to me nromal.
zb.: "The script is full of shit, just so as spaßt du"
better: "The story has me not so much but are you using now less andjektive,'re so ready tips from Slashcam implement ...."
schöne grüße
BN
Antwort von desert:
I found it not so boring. you have just a politically incorrect topic touched, and na? Today's society wants to entertain families and simultaneously shocked erleuchternd be what happens you will see s.den most hollywood productions. a sad, deep-black chapter of cinematic art. The question is, why are you doing this? you want something of you to express, then you will need courage, but only if you made money on art, you must either "krasser be old!" or you write for any scheiss SZGZ. just do next. gruss
