Frage von schlaflos011:
Hello, I had time last week and 4h time I tried s.einem hit video.
I urge the still somewhat unhappy synchronization, as well as the lack of micro-cable to apologize. Even with the colors again, I must experiment. But as already erlesen this is my first attempt to shoot a music video.
http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=dkG110JKFNM
On your damning critiques freu I already ;-)
Antwort von PowerMac:
Some hideous color correction. The cuts are mostly jumping, which is more than bad. Since one can hardly justify the cuts and jump on your face.
There is no action synonymous. You jump between multiple vocal layers around. Why do not you build more plot? The stroller with the s.Feld and the exterior shots but gave room for ...
Antwort von Axel:
Damning? Objectively.
First, the images are beautiful Heile-Welt moderate winter romance. They are synonymous, but a little too freely, or a bit too arbitrary
cut. The most deliberate over-exposure is partly her face seem a bit creepy.
Good: The basic mood.
Better could it imagine if it were a continuous development. From peek through the window ( "I vermiss di"), for a walk on the melancholy-covered stubble fields where the yearning increases ( "Where do i get u doing Herzl hurt me").
Music videos have made it difficult. If you imagine a subject (a small "action"), they have at least a starting point, s.dem they can be measured. Then they would have the same entitlements apply as for a dramatic short film.
Antwort von j.t.jefferson:
[quote = "PowerMac" The cuts are mostly jumping, which is more than bad. Since one can hardly justify the cuts and jump on your face.
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How PowerMac thinks that with "the cuts are mostly jumping"?
What can you do that on the other hand, the cuts are not so bad "jump"?
Antwort von j.t.jefferson:
.... by fits and cuts filming ... ?
Antwort von Axel:
Another hiker from the world of lost interim guests.
You have to admit that your cuts are not always elegant and logical not synonymous. Like you I avoid this? By you not of a swing into a stand-still Picture, or, worse, of a swing in one at a swing in the other direction cut. By the next picture you as the next, somehow linked with the previous thought or comment and is not regarded as a series of idyllic stopgaps.
You
wanted criticism.
Antwort von Markus:
What can you do that on the other hand, the cuts are not so bad "jump"? In the "jump" you can understand different cutting errors. For example:
1) contour error Two consecutive scenes are so similar that you do not have the impression of a real cut, but that it rather looks like a Bildruckler. This failure violates the continuity of time and possibly synonymous against the continuity of the plot. (Specialist Chinese please as the basis for your own research to understand other that goes beyond the frame).
2) Achssprun g A scene might be synonymous jump, if for no apparent transition, the imaginary axis activity is exceeded. This is something irritates the viewers.
3) continuity errors If two consecutive scenes are different (ie the opposite of 1) is true), then the audience does not know exactly how the one with the other related. One then speaks of a break in the continuity of action, time or place.
Antwort von schlaflos011:
Thank you for your criticism. Surprisingly a lot of valuable information, have doubled in the last hidden answers.
I admit, for example, Powermac quite right and see my "Schnipselei" similar.
Basically we will try again at a different playback singing and recordings to film together. The Winter Walk happened rather by chance. (I had this "ideal world" Schlager / landscape photography in mind.) Of course not synonymous, nor the story - I just s.der work. (Suggestions are always welcome!)
Because I really am curious, I have me a classic hit video views.
I would have just the singer to sing the field (ie only a vocal setting) and in between mountains, twigs, flower show
Oh yes, the whole tape in lederhosen in the background should not be missed. ;-)
lg from Upper Austria
Antwort von hhmb:
before you completely torn'll have the following: you have something ready in advance and this is good. you honest and professional feedback received: this is very good. and the next time you try to make it better and we are better. So go ahead and always positive thinking;)
