Frage von Blackeagle123:
Hallo ihr Lieben,
In my last vacation I had the task of turning an image of video on a sailing ship (Barracuda II). The order came very short notice, and unfortunately I could only work without a tripod. (www.barracuda2.de)
http://rapidshare.de/files/32642960/barracuda_2.mpg.html
is the download link. The video is expected with 30Mb but appear to be quite large, but maybe the one or the other so time to download the video on the way (as Mpeg1 VCD) and to then consider.
I would like your honest and critical opinion, with Quallität is obviously not very good. The colors do not appear very pale (the original!)
For the video I get into my next vacation may be paid for a sailing trip of a week, with many friends on the 2-master.
Actually, was being considered but no pay.
Thank you once already in advance!
Quite a lot, dear greetings
Constantin
Antwort von oliver II:
Constantin Hello!
You notice that you have given you trouble in this film and I like him well as a whole. I have tried to look at the film less as filmmakers, but more than any prospective s.einem sailing.
A few criticisms I have, which I present here briefly:
The scenes (at least s.Anfang are) a little too short (is not a music video and people will fall in love with the pictures "")
The lighthouse was less wobble (since there is software to Entwackeln)
The extreme Farbsprung at night disrupts Amsterdam
The second card can be "Yssel" either get out or longer. Here, too, interferes with the contrast of "slightly moving map" to Stillimage
Did you do the flying record at the Batavia shipyard yourself? If not, who has the rights to it?
Is there a Tonfehler at the scene "Boardcam"?
I have listened to me three times, but still do not understand: If you throw a coin over the side, then mumble mumble ...
The scene after the declaration of the skipper "... habitat ..." is rather silly and rather one relating to the break of dawn.
The sparkling animation in the credits is kitschy and directs) from (this Wunderkerzchen and synonymous dei change the font for data
In the second guy (animation above) You have a typo (Breita)
The reference to www.barracuda2.de I would otherwise get, because you can not read the banner anyway.
So, now I was able to suppress the filmmaker in me and not quite trust that you can with my suggestions what to do.
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
Hi Oliver,
Thank you for your criticisms. That was really all matters on which I had already given some thought synonymous, yet so calm s.end had!
A point was the spokesman above all that sounds too dull.
The aerial photos I have made herself.
Perhaps someone still has more to criticize s.dem video? :)
I would be pleased!
Many greetings
Constantin
Antwort von Markus:
Perhaps someone still has more to criticize s.dem video? :)
I would be pleased! Well, that's once a statement! - Should you ever win a Golden Raspberry, would you personally pick them synonymous? - I would certainly do. Would only be stupid, if you would climb to me before, because then it would not as a sensation. ;-)
He was referring to but not now on your video, which I could not see yet. The calculator, s.dem I am sitting, has no speakers. That is nothing.
Antwort von StefanS:
Why you are cutting something as leisurely as the report on a sailing trip with the jackhammer?
The spectator already requires a lot of concentration, because you inevitably try to come along with the rapid cutting to digest the images and simultaneously listen synonymous nor the speakers. It is often given me so much that I mentally picture "fades" to capture the previous picture, at least entirety. Mental dropped frames halt.
A little more trouble with the sound you'd be able to give you. Especially since the act amateurish enough wind noise. Since a can would have been better.
What's the effect of thunderstorms in the direction of guy?
Want to sell the ship or your average arts?
Otherwise, this was already the right direction. The text was quite good, even better to split it to two speakers.
Long story short:
If you have the opportunity to once again ranzugehen, simply let out a few scenes and the other a little longer. If I remember correctly, you need a man about seven seconds to take a picture entirely in itself. There are still differences, whether Totale (tends to be longer) or Close up (tends shorter), but review it views itself
Otherwise, keep the boat in the foreground, not you.
Greeting
Stefan
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
Hi everyone,
So erstmal a very big thank you! I have even s.das video rangesetzt the scenes longer made, the speaker gave greater heights, many pictures with 2d3's software SteadyMove quietly made Sometimes color correction, sound a little bit of correction in volume ...
So on the whole the film works through these small changes actually a lot calmer and is more pleasant to look at!
Synonymous Maybe I'll upload the new version again.
Of course I am delighted with my other criticisms, or your opinion about the movie.
Many dear greetings
Constantin
Antwort von oliver II:
Synonymous Maybe I'll upload the new version again. Yes, go ahead! Before / After is always interesting.
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
So, here is the new video:
http://rapidshare.de/files/33005096/barracuda_fertig.mpg.html
As has already been written are small changes that bring (but above all peace)!
In this version are the titles s.end Advertisement synonymous with gloss and glitter yet ;-)
Many dear greetings
Constantin
PS: Your opinion about the current version I'm interested:)
Antwort von Axel:
Salut Constantin.
As an occasional wedding anniversary and film maker I am telling you that you have the immediacy that value many individuals. Only the effect should give up chasing you. The games with the transitions to the strotznaiven Butterfahrt music is simply too much. After all: You do not scoff at this old boat and the whole lieferst off a pleasing movies. When the subject was harmless family entertainment, fine, but is now the synonymous themselves satisfied?
I always try to create a little added value to hang the whole thing s.einer little story. Suddenly there is a common thread, a development that even tension. Since then makes the cut fun when it's not just tourism Row behavior. And suddenly, the temptation to fall away, pimp anything by swirling handwriting. And the customers are absolutely thrilled.
In your case I would find a little Seemannsgarn quite entertaining. When the old man of the "environment, for the man is not created" rants (I would do s.den top), comes to romance. Served with a wink, do a little Spoekenkiekerei synonymous not detract from the children's health.
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
Hello Axel,
Thanks for your suggestion. But really wanted only an image video what the ship is, how fast it is, etc. In addition, there should be a couple of reviews are included.
But the idea with the "red thread" I think really good, I had them synonymous first. To tell a story, and while the "Kahn bring" more closely. But I think this result would not have been desired.
I must now wait and see the response times of the skipper.
The text of the off-speaker could be changed if necessary ( "It is an exaggeration to romance ,...") but he may not synonymous contribute ;-)
Quite a lot, love and greetings once again a big thank you!
Constantin
PS: Mark, if you have the opportunity to come s.einen computer with speakers and the video, it would be very glad to hear your views on them:)
Antwort von prem:
To tell a story, and while the "Kahn bring" more closely. But I think this result would not have been desired. They are children s.Bord. Children are the best fire accelerants for each story. How do the children of the first contact with the ship? How does the journey from child's eyes? The vessel appears larger (perspective), it is full of bizarre oddballs and potentially an adventure, at least, great fun. Would that not increase when the initial situation? A floating allotment association or worse, a retiree - trip boats, which is really not a good advertisement. Sometimes you can not take customers' wishes too literally.
Antwort von transsib:
Constantin Hello!
The choice of the pictures I like very well. The picture quality seems to me very handsome - what kind of camera do you use? Not so good, I like the jerky camera work - even on solid ground, such as the pivot at 0:37 to 0:40.
What is not at all I like the unfortunate elected and partly poorly understood Comments:
[...] Are included here synonymous longer routes. If so, then you take a course on - Garda along the route, for example.
[...] Seetoilette and shower are part of the large / coarse (inaudible) standard equipment No matter whether it's big "or" gross "means - in any case, for example," comfortable "or" substantial equipment / facilities would be "better.
Driver? (are unintelligible) s.Deck, all equal under the deck and the ship's officers For the navigation of the vessel alone, the skipper, so the skipper, who is responsible! Besides - who wants to be the same? If, then one with the other guests are "equal". Alternatively, guests can be synonymous, "team work".
The design is very unusual, the ship is very robust by the preparation [...] Aha - just what is so extraordinary, why was it more robust by the treatment than it was before?
[...] Hull speed of 9 knots phenomenal performance [...] [...] Not only that, the kind layman the term "hull speed" does not understand and probably synonymous with the single "node" can not do anything - in this context is synonymous to the factually inaccurate reference to the hull speed. The hull speed is a theoretical peak displacement Höchstgeschwindigeit. When the ship, as mentioned in the film, has a very small sail area, it is quite possible that this is only under strong wind or not at all. For your film, I would imagine more of a comment like this: "with even a slight breeze takes the x-ton boat ride and and fast forward controls with up to 9 knots, or about 16 km / h stage his goal"
[...] Has the best team on the glass of time [...] Häääh? Who is to do something? False, it is also synonymous yet. Clasen is already an indication of time - the word "time" not only unnecessary but wrong. In addition, the corresponding x Glasen time is not clear - Clasen describes the time of the respective relieving watches on a ship. Depending on the (guard) manning changes the length of each guard, and thus the unity synonymous bells. Simply say "after a long day at sea, one controls a port in time s.um [...]"
They come synonymous and check the seaworthiness of [...] Which host would probably be turned over to examine the seaworthiness? The average sailors probably goes out of a perfectly maintained ship!?
Gruß,
Oliver [/ b]
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
Hi Oliver,
Big thanks s.Dich. The things you've mentioned, I will still need to fix. Only the last comment, I must leave it, for the saying of the Barracuda II states: "Check your seaworthiness" ... Even if I find him just as silly as you! ;-)
I will again speak with the skipper that the text can be replaced ...
I film with a 3-chip camera of Panasonic! The shaky footage should be corrected in the newer version actually as good as. In the first version was really bad ... Which of the two did you see?
Many dear greetings
Constantin
Antwort von oliver II:
Link does not work!
EDIT: Go back!
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
Okay ... perhaps Rapidshare offline! (typical)
I guess you have you looked first version, if you now the second downloading. Can you write yes, then again what about the jerky pictures!
Many greetings
Constantin
Antwort von transsib:
Hello Constatin!
[...] Big thank s.Dich. [...] Your welcome! :-D I hope you take me the strong language not bad - after all I've herumgenörgelt not only synonymous but you just submit suggestions for improvement. ;-)
The version I have seen, had already revised version. You write that you use a Panasonic 3-Chiper - what is it exactly?
At the turn of my target, I was referring to where you once s.dem ship along swing. It looks as if though you are using a tripod, but this jerky in the rotation. Some pans You've probably synonymous changes during the swing, the rotational speed. If you do a project again so you might want to work in the recordings s.Bord synonymous with one tripod more often - especially on a moving ship, it is virtually impossible to keep quiet out of the hands, the camera, relative to the ship, too.
Continued success!
Gruß,
Oliver
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
Hello,
So the camera is the NV-MX300, miniDV. Images and super power is even used by ZDF in part as a reporter for inconspicuous camera shots.
At the turn I need to improve something else. The mission was quite short and I had no tripod at hand. Normally I would of course use a tripod!
At some other things I still need honing. (For example, the transcription s.end under "Data" ... * ouch *)
Many greetings
Constantin
Antwort von Markus:
Hi Constantin,
It was written so much and noticed, so I really only one thing remains: I find your video class. The contrasting with all the moviemakers s.of projects, which otherwise I know so. And I would say that my videos at your age not so long been so far. ;-)
That the sequence of scenes is fast, perhaps not right for a leisurely sailing ship, but we see no synonymous movie, but an Internet video clip. Which
may be quickly cut, not only that he
must be even. Otherwise, the internet user of countless banners and other windows would be diverted () so that it is an Internet video clip can not allow easy to be a moment too long, stays awhile) (.
Is the Internet as the ultimate distribution platform?
PS: Are you at the time 1:00? - Otherwise, one sees so rarely even pictures of the other slashCAM.
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
Hey Markus,
Thank you for your statement =) I'm glad!
The duration of 1:00, I am.
And you have brought me to the idea of Just play a Picture of my post below. But can easily connect all others?
Else is really little more impersonal.
The Internet should be the last distribution platform, japp.
And as you have already written, my intention was for the reasons synonymous a quick cut. In the first version of synonymous (by stuttering), but a little too fast ;-)
Many dear greetings
Constantin
PS: I'm so excited about the whole ma pictures. One imagines Written by someone who always completely different from before :-)
Antwort von oliver II:
That the sequence of scenes is fast, perhaps not right for a leisurely sailing ship, but we see no synonymous movie, but an Internet video clip. Which may be quickly cut, not only that he must be even. If I see is still different, because it's a commercial film and I believe that the target group is aged more than 30 years. Between too fast and scenes langweillig scenes there is still a great bandwidth. Unfortunately I could not download version two. My PC has the middle strike. I'll catch up but posten.PS and my thoughts about it here: I had no time grad no matching Picture of me and a guinea pig is not synonymous.
Antwort von oliver II:
Constantin Hello!
Have now looked at No.2 last version and am pleased that some of my suggestions have been put to you. I like it now even more than before! My compliments!
The "data" are to me too kitschy, but that is a matter of taste (except for the typo!)
PS: Ok, that with the "aerial" and its approval at the second viewing, I have finally seen through synonymous! LOL!
Weiter so!
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
Hey Oliver;)
Thanks again ... Yes, the helicopter will sound (I removed synonymous for the reason "Aerial" * g *)
The data geglänze has pleased the skipper particularly well. The typo I noticed synonymous. I will make the shine a bit shorter. On spraying vll synonymous nor do I have to work.
Many dear greetings
Constantin
Antwort von Markus:
Ma am excited about the whole picture. One imagines Written by someone who always completely different from before :-) I have the discussion time as well as he separates:
Antwort von Blackeagle123:
Has so well worthwhile! Thank you :-)
Many greetings from the land without the "ue" and "ss", Poland. I hope you know what I mean ;-)
Const @ ntin
Antwort von Markus:
... Poland. I hope you know what I mean ;-) Yes, your parents and report the car was stolen while the display to the police you are sitting comfortably in an Internet café and do slashCAM insecure! ;-)
