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Frage von figae2001:


Initially, good evening

I'm new here and have just synonymous my first proper film cut. And as the work needs to submit next tuesday and wollet times whether FAQs ir a glance purely because you can throw and say what I could still improve.
You can find the movie as a wmv (hope it works for everyone else reported) as a 34MB download (hope not too much else you know) to: www.andresilva.com / film.wmv
Greeting [/ i]



Antwort von Dongball:

Blong! Link nix go!



Antwort von steveb:

very bad. even with a nonexistent link to start.

but it seems to be a. com to be missing. so you ever come to the website, but where is the film.



Antwort von figae2001:

Sorry now you go.



Antwort von transsib:

Hello!

"figae2001" wrote: [...] And, as has the work next tuesday and submit wollet times whether FAQs ir a glance purely because you can throw and say what I could still improve. [...] It is about s.22.40 above. [/ i]

Then you had this post synonymous until 22:41 you can send. ;-)

For the film itself - for my taste, it is much, much, much too long, tells no story and the endless subtitles with a plethora s.Information are absolutely too much of a good thing! What should the film ever intended, what message is it transported? On me, he, as if you (of the ghoulish, wobbly combined pan / zoom apart) partially quite nice pictures and transverse cross in and around the school and then they simply have ranked together? Then even the subtitles and slightly grueling Gedüdel including nerves and the film was finished ...

Think about you but only once, with what you want to narrate the film, search out the key scenes, schnippel this together, restricting yourself to the subtitles to a minimum and then the synonymous what.

Gruß,

Oliver



Antwort von PowerMac:

These are Tiered pictures, no film. It lacks a clear history. And everything is or is too long. The interview is too much talk and live images of poverty.



Antwort von oliver II:

Hello!

I have given up after two minutes, because I SmartSound Gedudel could no longer hear. I also have the subtitle of image content very distracted. This would be a much better spoken commentary.



Antwort von steveb:

in 2 minutes max is all told, was what to tell.