Frage von Pete21:
Hello,
here is my first self filmed - a film about naturopathy Image:
Under www.die-recken.net/Chinesische_Medizin.wmv
Please ensure positive and negative criticism, especially perhaps a few suggestions, what matters in the light could have done better.
Pete
Antwort von gunman:
Hi,
I find the well-crafted film made, perhaps a bit too long (but this is a purely personal opinion). Maybe in between the doctor would also be able to speak a little, which would have a bit of variety in the comment brought.
But that is synonymous purely a matter of taste.
Looks great!
Gunman
Antwort von PowerMac:
Very briefly:
- Too long
- Entry is suddenly ( "Where am I now?"); Too quickly to the issue purely
- Speaker does not present and hardly involved; (of formal criteria such as unclean, a close debate, dialect, accents wrong, too long sentences and assessed the vocal sound apart)
- Why does not O-tones and so little Athmos?
- Jump cuts (of HT HT) in the treatment - does not
- Too much information in the text as a Picture
- Dudel Music: Why must this be? Because it's all so do?
- Camera: Naheinstellungen would be more good, less red-stitch ...
- You jump between text and followed by treatment-Page. As more levels are missing and images. China pictures? Images that radiate peace?
- Animations are a bit cheap
Overall, quite okay. There were others at the first time much worse.
Antwort von veejay:
Hi,
waiting for the website or the physician is to find the film quite enjoyable. The speaker is not intrusive, everything kept quiet.
For TCM's customers certainly fits.
Also, the slow roll in. I find explanations for the layman to understand the pace well.
Antwort von Axel:
Hi,
waiting for the website or the physician is to find the film quite enjoyable. Already, but everything is a little too "close". If there is a waiting room, may contribute to the quiet much longer and a bit stretched, relaxed.
The speaker is not intrusive, everything kept quiet. It sounds as if he parched mucous membranes between the recordings Melissentee with sipping honey. In addition, changes in the speech pauses of the sound: surround with record or in an anechoic chamber
really speak.
Antwort von kowi:
I find this video very informative. It is the essential of TCM to the point.
The film is not too long (10 min)!
The background music is subtle, quiet and relating to match.
The speaker is ok - perhaps a bit too fast.
Hand cleanly executed.
Antwort von Pete21:
Hello,
Thank so far for the abundant criticism. For 27 November is still a second shoot planned. I will try to make the film even using your reviewers a little better.
Planned are:
- Because it's an image film for a practice, I have pictures of the general practice. To do this I will usnatürlich Tripod, Dolly and light rail use.
- What do you think of it, in some (not all!) Recordings of the practice, a staff member to work? (eg recording of the treatment room. A fellow just remove the bed even)?
- I would like to experiment with the light. Should I prefer a documentary light use (neutral), or so it looks really nice, work with lighting effects (reflections, shine, shadow, etc.)?
- Interviews with the doctor are synonymous planned, where he was on the various issues still says something - to change between Off - and On-the text to create.
Other:
- The off-text has been until now with a consumer headset eingesprochen because no other possibility was there. I plan on finalizing the text of the film again with a good condenser microphone and SQN incorporated. For a professional speaker reaches the budget can not, therefore, the doctor himself
- On average, I would like to create beautiful animations and images from the launch to make a nice animation.
- A little Rotstich was with intent, because I believe that naturopathic practices a quiet and homely atmosphere and to have the color red suits.
Pete
