Frage von Andy_Freak:
Hello
I have about a week before a contest in MyVideo gesehn (Bruges see and die) and there is a great camera to win. So I've thought I could make a movie with my friends. This is our first film together and we have a really bad camera used. What do you think of the movie? the default was: scene, short film or trailer maximum length 5 minutes.
http://www.myvideo.de/watch/4170047/Erding_sehen_und_sterben
Andreas
Antwort von weitwinkel:
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Antwort von Eugen von ...:
Okay:
s.with camera did you right that is creepy. Take what better, especially with Apperture manual control, even at the beginning of pumping the brightness down (but the input scene is well done). A better camera will anyone in the know probably borrow times.
b) The Music is ... naja ... does not fit. Film music is a totally separate thing: what you like to listen to the slopes, determined not fit for the film. Also we are for certain things to write what prefer. Generally I find hard is only for very few things useable. On the subject of "Erding" I actually would rather choose what folkloric and synonymous only to the top (but not from the white spot and no Humbahumba from mutants Stadlober). Quiet. In the scenes tension strings are always made welcome, this is never wrong (obviously sooo not original).
c) The newscaster should have a tie wear. The scenery is well done! The text could be liquid coming. Can you rotate s.der voice? Bit darker? Watch / listen to real newscaster!
d) Do you have this in a real bank rotated? The hall is so ... hm, as after closing.
e) On Lockers: I think well done - building image, exposure primigravida.
f) neee, stress c), take another speaker: not fidget, do not falter, do not laugh (!).
g) 2:20 .. let the music aside and the same sunglasses s.besten synonymous.
h) The SFX are net schlecht ... until 3:36, the muzzle fire is not in the picture, but flasht the entire screen. Beautiful as the type of parking is thrown!
Sounds nasty but now, it ne? For a first film, this is really not bad! The idea is funny, and besides you have the times of procure * Camera crafted quite clean. I tell me, that
my first short film "The VHS tape was not worth it, on which I had recorded ...
Eugen
