Frage von pezi:
Hello,
ich hab mal long time ago with a few mates a video rotated. A friend of me now has a part of it on the Internet. The picture is actually in 16:9 format but was in Youtube after 4:3 stretched.
here is the link:
Do not be surprised that the film has no plot, because it is only the beginning scene. The rest was not on the internet, because some actors do not want to be shown.
I ask for criticism
Antwort von PowerMac:
How can you criticize a movie that is not quite visible and this is still distorted?
Antwort von pezi:
by saying the film was not completely distorted and ... ;)
Antwort von pezi:
Okay, I just prefer the leather: Think that helps s.meisten.
1) The cuts to the Music (zBbei seconds 00:30) you can suffer or not. About driving, you should (you) it did not. At least at the third repetition is annoying me.
2) The "pan" are too jerky. In addition, you should always move in the "pure" and again "out" cut. So with not setting a firm start, then moving camera, then stop and cut.
3) No zoom please. And if they do, then only if it does not do otherwise and even then, as slowly as possible and unnecessary. There are exceptions, but in essence it is true. The zoom down to minimum 4 - in speed - especially in the area of what you should do.
4) Camera wobbles too much sometimes.
5) Even if there would Handlunk, the sequence would be much too long.
6) The Charlie's Angels soundtrack is a highlight. Was that intentional or just think I Saukomisches?
general) The Camera and the cut somehow transported nix. That somehow, when it's someone you secretly filmed. Makes the atmosphere so unfortunately no.
Oh, and no roles s.Bekannte awarded. Want, then usually not that it is published. The experience you have already done.
What can I say?
Was it good? No..
Was it bad? Would say, unfortunately, yes.
If you leave it better? TO HEAVEN WILL NOT! This is with all of the time. My stuff is still lousy, but if it's fun to film, then as druff! The content nix I can say is quite clear.
Nehm I am not crooked, that I took it badly. So I have recorded many synonymous lying here. And the old tapes are not - this is still in the majority. Stay tuned.
Another impetus: The thing is six minutes and we know nothing, except the black guy and has two suitcases. In the time it could be a short act transported. You tried it. This is a manageable project and to learn the whole process (writing, storyboard, Rotate (with maybe two cameras), sound, lighting, editing, sound, music, bla bla bla) and the most common problems. Is better than a year later finally the material for half an hour NEN together and then have to remember that it is not conclusive, on average, receives, or the Story of s.hinkte beginning - or the performers do not want that anyone sees. ;) This is with the length of the material and the work is always annoying.
Or just turn just a little routine in camera, nice pictures "found" and gets cut.
For example, the following: someone comes home, goes out of me into the kitchen, takes a newspaper, encounters when reading something, it shocked the newspaper and are trying desperately and unsuccessfully to call someone. The 60 or 90 seconds long. Has no real plot, but what?
Help me such "exercises" extremely next.
Friendly greeting
Antwort von pezi:
The fact that the video is bad, I know myself. It's just a very long time since I've rotated it. It's so synonymous that the pictures are expressionless and very bad in color and light. We have taken with 2 cameras rotated. Unfortunately, it was that I was the only cameraman. So we had the material filmed of me often, since the others have so badly filmed. They wanted, however, credits are as a cameraman. Well so are they just stop. I find the video now synonymous fairly misserabel. But it is difficult synonymous with over 10 pubertal children and adolescents a film because it is a mess. Boa is so schrecklicklich.
Antwort von pezi:
very boring. If you nix mind than what you could take action ....... just what makes socially critical ... something in which you live does not fit in any entertaining form. Would be much better. In any case I do if I nix otherwise clever mind. So do not give up. Everybody has been a amateur;)
