Frage von ano31:
Hi All,
I am a long-standing passive snoopers of this forum and would now like your first competent knowledge to take advantage;)
We would love constructive criticism to our music video "road of life will ...
here's the link:
http://www.videocommunity.com/pc/pc/display/14838/laurin/
Content:
"No matter how much you synonymous fall on your face, it is s.Dir to stand up again." Join our protagonist a piece on his life ...
The film was shot with a Canon HV30
As video software VDL had to serve 16 plus
The whole thing is a no budget production
Schonmal in advance many thanks for your efforts!
Regards, Andreas
www.tiefgang-erleben.de
Antwort von domain:
The singer himself is with this voice, this figure and this outfit probably never become a popular figure. And that does everything well, unfortunately, synonymous rest.
Antwort von campool:
nu joa ... a little more color to the film would do well.
Antwort von ano31:
... first thank you for the first time responses!
s.Domain: with
constructive criticism, we felt really more the content of the video, the technology, editing, etc., and not personal taste.
That's not all like the music (or any actor) is probably obvious to everyone. Because the flavors are too different to happiness ...
s.Campool: Ähemm ... That was by design!? How far more color?
.... about further comments we would love our huge, so maybe the next will be better:)
Regards ....
Antwort von frm:
I think it's synonymous to the color effect was overused.
Personally, I do not think that it is acting in the music video but that's like saying Geschmakssache.
I personally like imemr shots with less shutter so that the movements are not as sharp (2, I was terribly sick!)
But otherwise for a very low budget production Pasabel.
Hg
Florian
Antwort von FabeX:
So the best recordings I find to 03:32 ..
Why?
Because here somehow fits the mood ..
You have you actually been quite difficult .. But something I find is not consistent ..
The music is gloomy .. Colorful images but totally .. (albeit synonymous has written one above, not a bit more color'd hurt ..)
I think the s / w-effect, etc. .. naja Debia .. is to me the whole video too much of a good one.
What I think the whole video would do well is:
- Less Contrast
- Dark .. much darker ..
A more Düsterer song should not be sung at the bright sunshine, I think ..
Antwort von domain:
Given the current dynamics with shortest extremely sexy video clips, of course, rather a weak message along with all the effects with an even more unattractive to singers who could perhaps be animating for right fringe groups.
But one thing I could already imagine myself as an alternative, namely the art of slowness, that is showing the personality of a type that is in fact very likeable and has something to say.
On this, now more ungewöhnlchen level, I could imagine what I already mE ..
Complete style change would in my view, therefore, requested.
Antwort von markus2h:
We would love constructive criticism to our music video "road of life will ...
here's the link:
http://www.videocommunity.com/pc/pc/display/14838/laurin/
In principle, I think it's a no-budget production of highly acceptable - the style must not like them, but he is consistently maintained. Personally, I have the color effect to many colleagues and I give the right when they say dark music and not so bright really together. What really bothers me, however, is the fact that the tattered trousers, the trouser suit, but any old "designer" jeans, the shirt but definitely not the suit shirt. This is a fundamental breach - as one remains unconscious rack to hang. That does not fit.
Regards, Markus
Antwort von soan:
Hi,
I find your kind of color editing draws continuously from the main motif. Colored background and the main section ( "middle ground" and foreground) in black and white - it is counterproductive. One is constantly tempted by the main motive for the background.
Antwort von ano31:
s.frm (; Florian):
THX for your statement, Crank 2've never seen before;)
s.FabeX:
We give you right that the images seem harmless on the road a bit, which we later found synonymous in the final result.
Actually, it was thought that the street is the "successful" in life, and the quantities in the "crash". Perhaps we would have to find another street with less green ... hmmmm
s.markus2h:
well, you see the protagonists in several stages of life, and yes there is sometimes synonymous changes his pants;) - but you're right, in the video it is not very good, but Jens (;) wanted the actors partout his expensive suit pants NOT for the Video of the sacrifice bastard ....
: s.soan
hmmm ... You're right, if that would happen only in one scene. But as we show continuos color only the trees and the sky, is this all right, we find ....
Thank you all for your the time you have taken a critical look at our video. We want more of it!
So maybe one or the other is not ready to write something? We would be happy:)
Regards Andy
Antwort von PUDU:
I hope you let you through all the bad criticism is not discouraged, because I think that there are a few good ideas and enjoyable sequence there! This could only be through a better picture schedule not yet set a much better scene. Here you should in future be a little more on it.
Good, I think the decision to play the "story" of the tape can not, but what can they do that in the video, it can s.besten: Namely, to make music. Everything else is done quickly backfired.
In addition, it will be on average a little more alive.
The split-screen would I take out. Which is totally unjustified dramatically, mainly because in all cells of the same picture. All these effects should you be any better, because it makes them look a whole wanted very quickly.
That the color is underground, has been mentioned so often enough. If you make of it honestly S / W and the whole of the post is still a bit low-keyiger riff, pulls you ever get out a lot!
The whole video looks squashed. Is that so?
I feel the video is too long synonymous. Perhaps you can create a tape or a 3-minute version. So you can gather up and throw the whole of one or the other not so successful scene.
So strictly revise again. Were else bad about the work that you reingesteckt her before!
Antwort von ano31:
s.PUDU,
I see all this not as "bad" criticism. We do ask for
constructive criticism and we now get. And if that is still described as factual, as of you, then glad about that
We are sorry to disappoint you. The tape plays the roles themselves;)
The Haupdarsteller, the boss and the counterparty (; the way I am) in the video are Bandmitglider. The singer, however, was "just sing":) We really do everything ourselves. From the first sound to the final cut.
That the color is not for everyone .... ok, but underground?
What do you mean with crushed? Can you better explain?
With the length of the video you have certainly right. One does not necessarily show 3 Settings from telephoning or 4 Moneyübergaben. When the video was one minutes shorter, it would surely get even tighter and more exciting over.
Thank you for your letter:)
Regards, Andy
Antwort von schlaflos011:
What does the pop screen on a dynamic vocal micro? ;-)
Antwort von ano31:
It helps to suppress the poppen too;)
Greetings:)
Antwort von FabeX:
s.frm (Florian):
s.FabeX:
We give you right that the images seem harmless on the road, which we have subsequently found synonymous in the final result.
But there were already all the scenes in the box and those were days of filming for several weeks. Actually, it was thought that the street is the "successful" in life, and the quantities in the "crash". Perhaps we would have to find another street with less green ... hmmmm
Well .. you've apparently spent considerable time in the post .. because you would have been able to loose change ;-)
Antwort von r.p.television:
For NoBudget erstmal quite well.
You see, unfortunately, too often the very videol Picture of the HV30.
What bothers me personally is the (; sorry) a bit cheap-looking color passport As I have said here the main character would thus appear very pale.
If already on the way the S / W should share much of the dynamic contrast range - be synonymous darker. The S & W share now looks as if someone had just rausgedreht a 08/15-Videosignal with gamma correction, color (; is yes) synonymous the case. If you in that direction a little at the beginning of the experiment weglasst and Splitsceen the video is much better of the overall effect.
Personally, I would represent the supposedly beneficial to life, including the Fremdgeherei completely gray and the alleged crash and reflection on the essential color.
But that's just my opinion.
Shorter would not be synonymous bad. But the effort much larger than a better grading of Color and contrast is.
Antwort von ano31:
Overall, we were somewhat surprised that many do not like our choice of colors.
To get a more accurate idea of how you find the video, we started again a small survey (according to the principle of school grades)
Thank you for your vote ....
Regards, Andy
Antwort von robl21f:
hello andy
PRECAUTIONS farbwahl / color matching: it says nothing in principle against such random farbspielereinen / color matching, but in this instance (and since I am now speaking for me personally) it is 1) out of place and 2) is not clean ... you have to 1) why did not they used to highlight certain things (handy, money bundles, suitcases, ... ect)? the planting of green (why this? wg the beautiful green? ") directs in the case only on the actual theme / motif from - and 2) is also not consistently drawn (though the green and then completely synonymous throughout and not only certain, Frayed share), which interferes additionally
gruss rob
Antwort von pilskopf:
This can not do better with Magix, in the rest of his Green will have been yellow in it. I shall take s.dass her with a Virtual Dub filter you have made. I had it but then alienate synonymous rather just leave and played more with other improvements to the video, yes, there was the intention. So instead of just trying to remove the video style.
Why is the video squeezed? Is this intentional or accidental? If you want to have black bars, making it with a black and white mask on then a Chromakey effect. Then you could still create a beautiful and good vignette about it, this is a good stylistic device around the eye to the center and fix the details and can work very well for you, however, have to themselves and then tinker with Magix Edit synonymous by Chroma Key .
Antwort von DWUA:
This "music" - "Video" rather begs the question,
whether it was sensible to verfeaturen themselves ".
;)
Antwort von ano31:
the "squashed" is now removed, it now runs correctly in 16:9:)
s.DWUA:
simply because it has made a lot of humor? Have fun;)
Regards, Andy
Antwort von DWUA:
simply because it has made a lot of humor? Have fun;) Good to see the clip at your next "comes across".
For example, scenes in which one synonymous times, people in their work
(Making music could visit).
;)
This time as a "frustrated tension.
Antwort von pilskopf:
On the one hand you want more content, and on the other hand, if one tries to bring content into a video based on a story, it is again not quite synonymous. About the finished product, you may argue, yes. Only you decide you should have. This does not apply to the thread starter. Tips how he could combine story and tape would of course be more productive. One could say yes synonymous, it fhlen the women with bare breasts, the singer must be black and wearing a white suit, then fat and car please with a cam rotated to any costs 1000 ¬. But then so were all the same shit music videos. ;)
Antwort von DWUA:
.... But then so were all the same shit videos ... If they are indeed synonymous!
Up to 1% of one percent, there is very synonymous
probably exceptions that prove the rule.
;))
Antwort von B.DeKid:
OT:
LOL So do you mean Duwa 0.01% of all, yes?
Where to me only the question of "How many videos there probably are?"
Unfortunately, I have found to date as yet no figures - just nen Merry report about whether the PRS was now rated for Streamed Music Videos 1 or 12 cents ;-) (What you allow it to dissolve on the tongue must be times what it would mean LOL - full of dreamers, GEMA Fritzen)
...................
/ OT Off
Antwort von DWUA:
LOL So do you mean Duwa 0.01% of all, yes? Nonsense! Only an attempt to break the vicious s.The wall paint!
;))
Antwort von B.DeKid:
How would that look like - so roughly?
Antwort von MarcBallhaus:
The main problem with the clip is more likely that it is too long. People who told you that the sound limit is ninth at 3:30? When everything is much longer guck None more attention.
The colors nerves and act amateurish, the actors are bad, the connections between the layers reveal a certain directed planning, which I priced very positive. Overall, I think it's to uneasy, however, it tries to explain too much, so rather like pantomime theater than film. Content yes please, but not so.
Micro Sabberschutz the front way, I think smart!
MB
Antwort von KSProduction:
The singer himself is with this voice, this figure and this outfit probably never become a popular figure. And that does everything well, unfortunately, synonymous rest. pure wonder of music taste. Who is on EBM is another opinion. Your contribution does not contribute to talk shop in matters of video technique and is unfortunately useless: - /
Antwort von KSProduction:
So the best recordings I find to 03:32 ..
Why?
Because here somehow fits the mood ..
You have you actually been quite difficult .. But something I find is not consistent ..
The music is gloomy .. Colorful images but totally .. (albeit synonymous has written one above, not a bit more color'd hurt ..)
I think the s / w-effect, etc. .. naja Debia .. is to me the whole video too much of a good one.
What I think the whole video would do well is:
- Less Contrast
- Dark .. much darker ..
A more Düsterer song should not be sung at the bright sunshine, I think .. a good contribution. where the tension to match the music still in my opinion, was implemented ....
Antwort von Axel:
No idea if the song is "bleak". He is "wanted", according to the motto
today must be the bell or
rhyme you or I eat you. Remember purely by the sound of his voice, and her s.Rammstein ( "In her head lives an eel") that are good for LBS ads with the would-be rockers ( "You hangs obliquely your awning" would fit). But who's mag ...
So I think the song itself larifari would be a dramatic and emotional pointed Videoplot synonymous even inappropriate. So: Thumbs up!
Antwort von DWUA:
How would that look like - so roughly? Gude,
yeah, in principle already. Just not so naive.
There are tougher image examples.
:)
